RATS MONO (in progress ~ opinions needed).

I have spent much of the last week, and lost a painful amount of sleep, working on this animated short for my class. Even though it was to be done by this week, it still needs more work, particularly in the coloring and timing. I would very much appreciate some opinions as to what to change. The ones I am getting over here are so far, quite helpful.



Also, I have been looking up various film and animation festivals around the world to submit my film, IVAN'S ACT.

So far, IVAN'S ACT has been submitted to five places, including England. I need to find more places to submit it to.